The genre of this one is a letter type form. It is about this book we read the first semester .The book is called the tiger rising. It came from the book we had to write about someone in the book and I wrote about Beachamp. One thing I would change is make it long for one and spelling and the use of grammar.
Beachamp is the owner of the Kentucky Star and owns the tiger. He is really rich and owns the woods. When Rob gets the keys he gets paid 2 dollar every time he feeds the tiger. Beauchamp will give Rob meat to feed the tiger. Beachamp is really crazy. He almost hit a tree. Rob is feeding him because I think Beauchamp scared of the tiger. Then Beauchamp gives Rob the keys. Then his dad found out that Beachamp gave it to him. But not it was for the tiger. Rob’s dad did not knowing by the t was for a tiger. His dad was standing by the gun case as he stared at his guns. Then Sistine and Rob shows Willie May the tiger. Then she was disgusted about Beauchamp owning the tiger. Then Sistine says we should let it free. Then Willie May say no it is not our tiger to save. Then Sistine run away. She started to go to her house. Rob goes after her. Then Beauchamp goes down the road screaming. Over all Beachamp is still a crazy old man.
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